Year 12 film pitch feedback group 2
Individual Reflections
I believe that institutionally we were successful in choosing a distribution company that suits our film as Miramax distribute stylised/indie films, and even distributed one of our main inspirations Kill Bill. I think that the concept for our film is a good one as it targets both genders at a wide age range between 15-30 (primary audience). However, in regards to our opening sequence presentation I believe that we were too brief and unclear as to what actually happens in our seqquence, and things that we had previously discarded were brought up as current ideas which further made our presentation unclear, such as the use of our male characters family. Initially we were going to show his wife and child leaving the house but decided against it. However we did not chage this on our initial treatment and so it was brought up by Miss blackborow, which then highlighted our lack of preparation. We also had no evidence of research into our gun sounds and effects needed for this shot which was is a key shot in our opening.
Having said that I believe I presented ok on the inspirations of The Bourne Trilogy and Casino Royale and how we could incorporate ideas from them and use them in our sequence.
I wasn't surprised when Ms Blackborow and Mr Bayliss didn't give us a green light right away as there's still alot that we had to think about regarding our sequence, and it gave us time to think about the suggestions and criticisms that were brought up in our presention and how we could improve/resolve any problems.
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